September 27, 2022

IDEAS ON TUESDAYS 559

Each Tuesday, rather than a POSSIBLY IRRITATING ESSAY, I'd like to both challenge you and lend a helping hand. I generate more speculative and teen story ideas than I can ever use. My family rolls its collective eyes when I say, "Hang on a second! I just have to write down this idea..." Here, I'll include the initial inspiration (quote, website, podcast, etc.) and then a thought or two that came to mind. These will simply be seeds -- plant, nurture, fertilize, chemically treat, irradiate, test or stress them as you see fit. I only ask if you let me know if anything comes of them. Regarding horror, I found this insight in line with WIRED FOR STORY: “ We seek out…stories which give us a place to put our fears…Stories that frighten us or unsettle us - not just horror stories, but ones that make us uncomfortable or that strike a chord somewhere deep inside - give us the means to explore the things that scare us…” – Lou Morgan (The Guardian)


H Trope: Haunted Castle/Mansion
Current Event: http://www.dreadcentral.com/news/31105/cold-spots-glensheen-mansion

“No! Really! I saw the ghost!” said Enzo Solem. His wild hand waving came more from the passion of his French forebears than the stolid formality of his Norwegian. First generation from both sides, he’d been born and raised just north of the Twin Ports of Duluth and Superior.

He also had a wild passion for the paranormal.

Weayaya Aguirre sighed. Enzo was her best friend but sometimes he bugged the living daylights out of her. Shaking her head, she said, “Why can’t you just accept that the world is the world and that’s all there is?”

He stared at her incredulously and exclaimed, “You work here, too! How can you say that? You’ve seen the apparitions just like I have!”

Shaking her head, Weayaya – Wee-ah to the rest of the staff at the Glensheen Mansion – said, “I’ve told you a dozen times that I don’t know what you saw that night. I saw some kind of heat shimmer from the furnace.”

“And I’ve told you two dozen times that I talked with Elizabeth Congdon!”

“A woman who’s been dead for half a century?”

“She’s not dead...” he scowled. “Exactly. Her spirit is trapped here because her son suffocated her under a pillow and then banged the night nurse over the head with a candlestick.” Wee-Ah sucked in her lower lip and bit it gently to keep from responding how she wanted to respond. He added, “All I’m asking is that you come with me tonight. It’s the night of June 26...”

“You want to see her ghost, right?”

“Nope.”

Wee-Ah frowned and looked at him. This was not the answer she’d expected. “What?”

“I want to see the ghost of her son. He confessed to her murder and was sent to jail, getting out five years later. His ex-wife, Elizabeth Congdon’s sociopathic adopted daughter never gave him any of the money she inherited from her mother’s murder. He killed himself five years after his release from prison – though I’ve heard people whispering that Congdon’s daughter did him in.”

“So you want to see if the ghost of one of Congdon’s ex-son-in-laws comes back here?”

“Yep. Marjorie died in prison in 2022, five years before the fiftieth anniversary of her adoptive mother’s murder.”

“And you think that that is significant...how?”

“It’s obvious! Marjorie-originally-Congdon is buried in the family mausoleum.” Wee-Ah nodded. That much was true. “It’s now half a century after her mother’s murder by her second ex-husband Roger Caldwell.” Wee-Ah nodded, not even realizing she was encouraging him. He went on excitedly, “So I figure the psychic energy will be so powerful that not only will Roger’s ghost appear, so will Velma’s; her third husband Wally was murdered as well as his ex-wife; plus some old guy she defrauded of all his money in a nursing home in Arizona. His name was also Roger, though his last name was Sammis. Her first husband – with whom she’d had seven children – was Dick LeRoy and he died the same year she did – 2022. So it’s 2027, fifty years after someone murdered Elizabeth Congdon. I would say that Marjorie Congdon LeRoy Caldwell Hagen has some serious psychic reckoning coming.”

Wee-Ah found herself nodding in agreement before she could think things through. That was how she found herself kneeling in the bushes near the Congdon family stone marker in the Forest Hill Cemetery on this dark and stormy night, cold summer rain dribbling down the back of her hastily donned poncho.

Enzo leaned over to her and whispered, “It’s five minutes to midnight…”

Names: ♀ Sioux, Spanish; ♂ French, Norwegian
Image: https://cdn.britannica.com/40/11740-004-50816EB1/Boris-Karloff-Frankenstein-monster.jpg

September 24, 2022

Slice of PIE: DISCON III – #11/Mining the Asteroids PART 7: Asteroid Mining and the Global Economy...Tales of Flying Mountains

Using the Programme Guide of the 2021 World Science Fiction Convention, DisCON III, which I WOULD have been attending in person if I felt safe enough to do so in person AND it hadn’t been changed to the week before the Christmas Holidays…I will jump off, jump on, rail against, and shamelessly agree with the BRIEF DESCRIPTION given in the Program Guide. I will be using the events to drive me to distraction or revelation – as the case may be. The link is provided below where this appeared!


Panelists:

Geoffrey A. Landis: NASA, John Glenn Research Center, aerospace engineer, writer
Bob Vernon: Air Force, Department of Defense work
Peter N. Glaskowsky: computer architect, space elevator author, inventor
Keith Gremban: robotics, Department of Defense work

A long-time interest of mine has been mining the asteroids. I wrote a story that involved it, but haven’t been able to interest anyone in it.

I watched this session with lots of interest.

I’ll be grouping each person’s comments on the subject and add in anything else I think of at the end!

GEOFFREY LANDIS:

- [Are these] resources for EARTH, or resources in SPACE? Who’s there?
- Do we send Humans, robots, or both?
- Geological metals, soluble in iron. Platinum is dissolved in iron; metal ores; what about Psyche (asteroid in the Main Belt). Iron is mixed with rare-earths on the surface. Catalysts – catalytic converter. “All cars will be obsolete by 2032.” Gigatons will be used, highly abundant NOT on Earth. By refining the iron, nickel, and cobalt from the asteroids, we remove the “impurities” from 98.998% of the iron – about 25 parts per billion. That’s reasonable. Don’t go to carbonaceous chondrites = carbon, CO passed over iron and nickel = volatile gas. Transport: return to CO = rare metals, ferrous metals – bringing them to Earth would be too expensive. A PLATINUM FACTORY = that would be HUGE! Pl, Fe, Ni all come out pure. Economical – we do it on Earth, can we fo it in space?
- What else? H2O, carbon, precious metals, mining for space colonies, LUNAR mining?
- Science fiction gets asteroid and Lunar mining wrong
- The Moon’s short on carbon (a crazy writer, Asteroid Mega-Novel) Allow people to move out, mine iron, assemble for Earth. BUILD in space, drop onto Earth.
- Economical value of space junk? How about the little guy who can skip orbits? PROPELLANT BUDGET.
- Junk is boosted into GRAVEYARD ORBIT (???? Idea for a story title???)
- Telerobotics – but people still have to be NEAR. But Phobos controls them…

BOB VERNON:

- It’s hard, but it WILL happen. Should do: spinoffs to GET there; develop technology from the spinoffs
- once the volatiles are gone, take the iron
- Robotic prospecting, someone in a spacesuit pulling their robot “mule” behind them
- Legal aspects of space mining? “it’ll be the wild, wild west”, you just can’t land settlers on the ground
- TOURISM! BUT, you’ll need infrastructure in place.
- Build equatorial Earth colonies in space: L5, O’Neill, WITH RADIATION SHEILDING (maybe the waste scavengers sell the leftovers processed into a slurry, sort of like “space cement” that’s quick, cheap, and easy to do???)
- It WILL produce more resources than we can EVER USE (Hmmm…that’s what logging companies said about the giant White Pines along the St. Croix – they logged it out in 22 years, then headed West, leaving behind brush, weeds, and a devastated land…)[Picture from my personal files]
- Military will want to clean up junk (maybe like the old Works Projects/Progress
Administration or the Civilian Conservation Corps????)
- can use ground-based, industrial lasers because they can’t focus very far out.
- can also use propellant to deorbit the smaller garbage
- we CAN’T do it with the tech we have. We need a Human mind closer to the stull. Drones have to have a Human to control them in the loop [DThomsen?]
- EFFORTS give us hope; robotics are advancing and we’re (supposedly????) moving toward AI.

PETER GLASKOWSKI

- We can and WILL mine asteroids, but for the purpose of argument: 99% of the stuff left over from mining will be thrown away. But we should use it in space…
- Rare Earths, metals, Platinum, radiation guns (that Jewelers use???)
- Carbon, H2O and H for propulsion
- Moons are covered with ice; the “ice line” [story title!] = rock on the outside, frozen water on the inside
- Asteroid Mining Winters – no longer interested; “bitcoin companies” are dead; “TransAsteroid Corporation”, talking about it. Economics are NOT “bullish”, thought they could get ahead
- Company that actually tries to do it…
- have to have BOTH asteroid and Lunar mining
- Trying to entertain, “Robot Mule” – Good story! BUT miner bots don’t TEACH people how to do it…
- How big are diamonds? What part of the world economy? Refining in space, eliminate pollution; create technology to refine without waste! CO resource…
- Move off for INCENTIVE might create a market for companies to IMPORT from space. What’s the environmental cost [My thought: WHY aren’t Climate Changists talking about moving industry off Earth? Why are they constantly talking about “give up, give up, do with less, do with less!” Why not get rid of the Chicken Little attitude?]
- Tethers Unlimited, Rob Hoyt ( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yLjxoscCi0A ), make a big ball of crap, with sticky stuff; poisons for industrial processes???

KEITH GREMBAN

- Economics of it SHOULD do; spinoffs to get there, develop the tech from the spinoffs.
- ROBOTS! NOT HUMANS!!! Need economic incentives to include Humans
- Mining the MOON provides resources to mine the asteroids
- can use Far Side mining to create radio telescopes funded by universities…
- focus on interesting BIG problems, we don’t look at small ones!
- refine metals, etc, IN SPACE
- We CAN get robots to do it, but WE want to be there!
- mining the asteroids is inevitable, but ROBOTICS is the key and competition is NECESSARY

So, there you go, the experts have weighed in, and the fact is that this is going to go into a series I’ve been writing on mining the asteroids. I suppose I should have led off with this, but I didn’t, so…there you go. You might want to check the previous posts in this series.

So, if you’ll excuse me, I’ll be getting back to writing stories!

Program Schedule: https://discon3.org/schedule/ 
Image: Personal File, Wild River [Minnesota] State Park, Exhibit, "A Vanished Forest" Copyright, Minnesota DNR

September 20, 2022

IDEAS ON TUESDAYS 558

Each Tuesday, rather than a POSSIBLY IRRITATING ESSAY, I'd like to both challenge you and lend a helping hand. I generate more speculative and teen story ideas than I can ever use. My family rolls its collective eyes when I say, "Hang on a second! I just have to write down this idea..." Here, I'll include the initial inspiration (quote, website, podcast, etc.) and then a thought or two that came to mind. These will simply be seeds -- plant, nurture, fertilize, chemically treat, irradiate, test or stress them as you see fit. I only ask if you let me know if anything comes of them. Regarding Fantasy, this insight was startling: “I see the fantasy genre as an ever-shifting metaphor for life in this world, an innocuous medium that allows the author to examine difficult, even controversial, subjects with impunity. Honor, religion, politics, nobility, integrity, greed—we’ve an endless list of ideals to be dissected and explored. And maybe learned from.” – Melissa McPhail.


Fantasy Trope: Fantastic Comedy
Current Event: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KpIJNGMh0IQ

Aarav Tlak shook his head and said, “Horses don’t talk.”

Kyla Das sniffed and said, “Shows what you know.”

“There’s no such thing as magic; there’s no such thing as a talking ani...”

“To reiterate what I said, you’re showing your ignorance by making such a categorical and sweeping statement. Are you including animals who have been trained or recognize commands?”

“Of course not! Animals can be smart and trainable, they just can’t talk.”

She gave him a long look then said, “So you’re saying that no animal on Earth can communicate?”

“No! You’re twisting my words. Animals communicate in a thousand different ways – some we can’t comprehend, like elephants talking below our level of hearing. But you’re talking about...about...about...talking like we’re talking and animals don’t do that.”

“How do you know?”

“You know what I’m talking about!”

“I could say that you’re a bit of an animal,” Kyla said with a smirk.

“I am not!” Aarav exclaimed.

She snorted then said, “You’ve never had to deal with yourself after you and your gf haven’t had a chance to make out.”

Sputtering, Aarav exclaimed, “That’s not fair!”

“That’s what criminals all say.”

He glared at her, took a deep breath, glared a while longer and finally said, “Proof would be you introducing me to some animal and then me and the animal having a conversation.”

“You’d accept that as proof?”

He gave her a funny look and she burst into laughter. Blushing furiously, he said, “Of course I’d accept it as proof! I’d hardly be a dispassionate scientist if I ignored an actual animal actually speaking to me.”

“Any animal?”

Aarav scowled, “I don’t like the direction this conversation is taking. What do you mean by that?”

She held out a stethoscope and said, “Put these into your ears.”

His eyes grew wide, he took them in hand, and said, “This isn’t funny anymore.”

“It’s not supposed to be. Warm up the end of that thing and put it on my belly – and prepare to be amazed.”

Names: ♀Philippines, Bangladesh; ♂ India, Croatia
Image: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/98/71/e5/9871e52bbc09c525af21b8f6471eab15.jpg

September 17, 2022

Slice of PIE: Of Emperors, Queens, Republics, and OTHER Ways To Be Ruled...now and in the future...


NOT using the Programme Guide of the 2022 World Science Fiction Convention, ChiCON 8, which I WOULD have attended in person if I had disposable income, but I retired two years ago, my work health insurance stopped, and I’m now living on Social Security, Medicare, and Savings…I WILL NOT use the Programme Guide to jump off, jump on, rail against, or shamelessly agree with the BRIEF DESCRIPTION given in the pdf copy of the Program Guide. This explanation is reserved for when I dash “off topic”, sometimes reviewing movies, sometimes reviewing books, and other times taking up the spirit of a blog an old friend of mine used to keep called THE RANTING ROOM…

While this is absolutely OFF topic, it is strangely, at this time, point on Topic.

Some years ago, my wife and I started watching a Netflix series called “The Crown”. Apparently, it took the television world by storm – and generated an immense amount of criticism because, while taking History as a firm foundation, it (apparently) flew off the handle more than once.

Wikipedia summarized it thus: “The first season covers the period from Elizabeth's marriage to Philip, Duke of Edinburgh, in 1947 to the disintegration of her sister Princess Margaret's engagement to Group Captain Peter Townsend in 1955. The second season covers the period from the Suez Crisis in 1956 to the retirement of Prime Minister Harold Macmillan in 1963 and the birth of Prince Edward in 1964. The third season spans 1964 to 1977, includes Harold Wilson's two periods as prime minister, and introduces Camilla Shand. The fourth season spans 1979 to the early 1990s and includes Margaret Thatcher's tenure as prime minister and Prince Charles's marriage to Lady Diana Spencer. The fifth and sixth seasons, which will close the series, will cover the Queen's reign into the 21st century…” and as of nine days ago, I imagine it will now also cover her passing.

At first glance, it seems that the queen of a rather small island nation would have virtually no impact on the world.

At second glance, no only did the country she “ruled” have an impact on the planet – invading and claiming for its own uses every continent on the planet, it also claimed to rule some fifty-eight countries, including the Thirteen British Colonies, Canada, India, Australia, New Zealand, and had effectively a monopoly on the planet’s economy for some time – creating and expanding a Slave Trade that still sends shock waves across the Human homeworld today…

So, what does this have to do with science fiction?

Ask George Lucas about the roots of the Empire…or Isaac Asimov about the roots of the Empire…or Frank Herbert about the roots of the Empire…or Lois McMaster Bujold about the roots of the Cetagandan or the Barrayaran Empires…or…how many science fiction writers have created Empires to rule Humanity et al? Or Phillip K. Dick?

How about Police States? George Orwell? Phillip K. Dick (again)? Cory Doctorow? Suzanne Collins? Yevgeny Zamyatin? Margaret Atwood?

Consumer States? Paolo Bacigalupi? Ian McDonald? Max Barry? Robert A. Heinlein (TANSTAAFL, anyone?)

And how many have created Republics…that have lasted? Ursula K. LeGuin…sometimes. Kim Stanely Robinson, certainly. In fact, he’s become something of a hero of he Future. THE NEW REPUBLIC journalist Jeet Heer wrote almost a decade ago, “Robinson, in effect, sees science itself as a kind of utopia: a collaborative, cooperative, international, disinterested attempt to understand the world and make it a better place. He doesn’t deny that, in practice, science might be corrupted by everything from petty rivalry to cupidity, but the act of doing science carries with it values that need to be broadened out and made a part of political life.” And yet, we have a republic; we have the spotlight on the world stage, but the dysfunction of government can hardly be laid solely at the feet of obtuse Republicans. In fact, there seems to be dissent in the Party of Al Gore on how to do science and apply it to our lives. Jeet Heer concludes the article with the following: “To paraphrase Jameson once again, the lesson of [Robinson’s book] 2312 is that it is easier to terraform Venus than to reach an international climate accord. Even the most splendid utopian imagination has its limits.”

Yet, the statement seems to assume that scientists will save the day (as usual), but makes no mention at all of HOW THE NEWLY TERRAFORMED VENUS WILL BE GOVERNED… In Robinson’s RED MARS, BLUE MARS, AND GREEN MARS, there are troubles in paradise because people STILL don’t know how to get along.

As a science teacher for 40 years, and a science fiction reader and writer for fifty-three years, I can say with a bit of authority that the PROBLEM is not the science. The problem is – and always will be – the PEOPLE.

Oh, and in case you didn’t see it? In the NEW Star Wars, the New Republic is DISINTEGRATED by the New Police Order…

Resource: https://newrepublic.com/article/123217/new-utopianshttps://best-sci-fi-books.com/21-best-political-science-fiction-books/https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/British_Empire

September 10, 2022

Slice of PIE: My “Evolution By Star Trek” (Sort of Like Trial By Fire…)

NOT using the Programme Guide of the 2022 World Science Fiction Convention, ChiCON 8, which I WOULD have attended in person if I had disposable income, but I retired two years ago, my work health insurance stopped, and I’m now living on the Social Security and Medicare…I WILL NOT use the Programme Guide to jump off, jump on, rail against, or shamelessly agree with the BRIEF DESCRIPTION given in the pdf copy of the Program Guide. This explanation is reserved for when I dash “off topic”, sometimes reviewing movies, sometimes reviewing books, and other times taking up the spirit of a blog an old friend of mine used to keep called THE RANTING ROOM…

I was only 9 years old when STAR TREK premiered.

But my Dad watched it. I wasn't allowed to stay up that late until Season 3. I got to start when I was 11 and turned 12 in the spring of 1969.

From the moment I first watched it, I fell in love with Star Trek and it's been over half a CENTURY since then. I became a SCIENCE TEACHER because of Star Trek...and just retired after 40 years in the classroom. This (at the time) single show shaped my life.

How? I played Star Trek and Aliens instead of “Cowboys and Indians”…of course, I didn’t have the special effects crew to create beams of lambent light or make totally cool sound effects. (Wanna hear one? Click on this, but keep your volume low! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fMFeEcSuX5Y (OOPS! Sorry…*wink*) actually THIS: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gbFmzZPyKlk) So I ran around shooting aliens with a hand-carved phaser painted green with a yellow stripe down the side. I’d cut a bit of wood at an angle in order to make a handle, then nailed five finishing nails into the “barrel”. To simulate the phaser sound effect, I let forth with a squeal while vibrating my lips like a trumpet player.

Star Trek ignited in me a deep desire to leave Earth and go to the stars. In those days, you had to be an astronaut and take your life into your own hands every day. Apparently you also had to be an elite soldier in the military. I couldn’t even do a PULL UP to pass the Presidential Physical Fitness Test…how would I possibly pull myself up by my bootstraps when I couldn’t even pull my pudgy body up high enough for my chin to reach the bar. And in the midst of the Vietnam War, I wasn’t real keen on enlisting before I got drafted, so that route was closed by a decision on my part. Star Trek came along just as I was finishing up THE WONDERFUL FLIGHT TO THE MUSHROOM PLANET and SPACESHIP UNDER THE APPLE TREE, and so I never completed the two series. But it was Star Trek (and growing up!) that launched me into the junior high library.

I started reading more science fiction. I blew through the juvenile works of Robert A Heinlein, Donald A Wollheim (who founded DAW Books), Andre Norton, A.M. Lightner (who I just now discovered was a woman!!!), Alan E. Nourse, and (of course), Madeleine L’Engle.

But, I’ll never forget perhaps the most influential of the YA science fiction novels I ever read: British author, John Christopher’s WHITE MOUTAINS Trilogy (eventually a quartet). I was in 7th grade when I first checked out the first book, THE WHITE MOUNTAINS – I give all kinds of details in SIX essays I wrote on my blog over the past nine years about the books. Needless to say, those books compelled me to keep the story going. They lit a deep desire in me to create my OWN worlds…( https://faithandsciencefiction.blogspot.com/2013/05/slice-of-pie-no-new-writing.html, https://faithandsciencefiction.blogspot.com/2021/06/slice-of-pie-in-terms-of-my-writing.html, https://faithandsciencefiction.blogspot.com/2015/09/slice-of-pie-who-are-we-imitating-these.html; https://faithandsciencefiction.blogspot.com/2019/11/slice-of-pie-teen-humor-combatting-grim.html; https://faithandsciencefiction.blogspot.com/2012/09/possibly-irritating-essays-how-teenya.html, https://faithandsciencefiction.blogspot.com/2012/07/possibly-irritating-essay-on-this-tour.html)

Reading THOSE books compelled me to pick up my pencil and write a truly horrible piece called “The White Vines” it was also written in painstakingly neat cursive. I’m sure I reread the WHITE MOUNTAIN books several times (I have two sets in my own library today!), until I finally moved on when I discovered the adult SF section of the Public Library and a magazine that took my fledgling writing and set a fire under me to one day get a story published in a floppy, pulp magazine called ANALOG Science Fiction & Fact.

But when push comes to shove, it really comes down to the single most influential television show I was ever (allowed by my dad!) to watch. It introduced me to strange, new worlds that even the stories I was reading couldn’t quite match. I started writing science fiction because of ST. I teach a class called ALIEN WORLDS to gifted and talented kids during the summer and at other conferences and venues because of Star Trek. I teach a different summer school class called WRITING TO GET PUBLISHED…because of Star Trek, and it’s wonderful!

Admittedly, it's also sort of creepy – but in a cool way.

Program Guide: https://guide.chicon.org/; https://locusmag.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/04/chicon-8-twitter.png
Image: https://images.squarespace-cdn.com/content/v1/5cc3d1b051f4d40415789cc2/eef621ab-a509-4949-8717-d98cece8fa9e/james-bama-novelization-cover.png




September 6, 2022

IDEAS ON TUESDAYS 557

Each Tuesday, rather than a POSSIBLY IRRITATING ESSAY, I'd like to both challenge you and lend a helping hand. I generate more speculative and teen story ideas than I can ever use. My family rolls its collective eyes when I say, "Hang on a second! I just have to write down this idea..." Here, I'll include the initial inspiration (quote, website, podcast, etc.) and then a thought or two that came to mind. These will simply be seeds -- plant, nurture, fertilize, chemically treat, irradiate, test or stress them as you see fit. I only ask if you let me know if anything comes of them. Octavia Butler said, “SF doesn’t really mean anything at all, except that if you use science, you should use it correctly, and if you use your imagination to extend it beyond what we already know, you should do that intelligently.”

SF Trope: Benevolent Alien Invasion (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BenevolentAlienInvasion)
Current Event: http://fortune.com/2016/06/01/poverty-simulation-camps/

Landon Smith shaded his eyes as he looked up into the crystal clear Nebraska sky. September was an odd time for an Alien invasion. “What do you suppose this group wants to see?” he asked the girl next to him as he pulled off his cowboy hat and wiped at the band of sweat. Even though school had already started, it was still a scorcher. Clarkson in Omaha had drawn him from his hometown with the brass ring of the first full-scale Theoretical Alien Psychology and Philosophy PhD in the country.

Olivia Williams had come for the same reason, though she hated the fact that she’d also promised to the college place-kicker on the football team. She sighed. She STILL wished people wanted her for mind more than her extra-point record. She said, “The same as all of them – poverty-stricken Earth People.”

“Yeah, but…” he began.

“Why come here and not Harlem or…”

“Addis Ababa or Dakar…”

“Or any of a hundred other places?”

“Why here?” they said together.

“It’s not like they talk to anyone – or even pay us any attention. We could be stray cats as far as they’re concerned.”

“Have you ever watched one of their ‘poverty retreats’?” Landon said as the first pallet jack rolled past with a platform of weird aliens. He knew he wasn’t supposed to feel that way, but they were all but incomprehensible to him – or any other Human for that matter. Not one single alien conformed to a body layout that even remotely resembled something on Earth. The “parallel evolutionists” were rethinking their theories at an alarming rate. The Laws of Evolution were being seriously considered as totally outmoded and insufficient to explain, well…anything living. One of the reasons he’d decided to major in TAPP.

“They’re so weird, they aren’t even creepy. Even in my worst nightmare I wouldn’t have been able to imagine these intelligences.”

“That’s why they aren’t particularly scary.” Landon said, “They don’t remind us of ourselves in any way, so they CAN’T be frightening. They’re…alien.”

They said the last word together again. She shrugged, “Well, I for one am looking for some way of breaking through their indifference.”

“You don’t hold with Feng Youlan’s theory that they simply cannot see us – that we’re so far outside of their realm of experience that their brains can’t interpret us at all?”

She laughed and they walked away, arm in arm. Behind them, one of the aliens twitched something that might have been an eye and might have blinked in what could be thought of as interest.

Names: ♀ common Arkansas names, ; ♂ common Idaho names
Image: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/e/e1/Falcon_9_Demo-2_Launching_6_%283%29.jpg/220px-Falcon_9_Demo-2_Launching_6_%283%29.jpg

September 3, 2022

WRITING ADVICE: Short Stories – Advice and Observation #18: Ted Chiang “& Me”

In this feature, I’ll be looking at “advice” for writing short stories – not from me, but from other short story writers. In speculative fiction, “short” has very carefully delineated categories: “The Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America specifies word lengths for each category of its Nebula award categories by word count; Novel 40,000 words or over; Novella 17,500 to 39,999 words; Novelette 7,500 to 17,499 words; Short story under 7,500 words.”

I’m going to use advice from people who, in addition to writing novels, have also spent plenty of time “interning” with short stories. While most of them are speculative fiction writers, I’ll also be looking at plain, old, effective short story writers. The advice will be in the form of one or several quotes off of which I’ll jump and connect it with my own writing experience. While I don’t write full-time, nor do I make enough money with my writing to live off of it...neither do most of the professional writers...someone pays for and publishes ten percent of what I write. When I started this blog, that was NOT true, so I may have reached a point where my own advice is reasonably good. We shall see as I work to increase my writing output and sales! As always, your comments are welcome!


Without further ado, short story observations by – with a few from myself…

My wife and I saw the movie “Arrival”, so I found that the movie had come from a short story by a writer I’d never heard of before, Ted Chiang. The main reason I’d never heard of him is because I rarely read SF or F anthologies. He did have a story in ASIMOV’S and two in F&SF, but I didn’t hit the right issue.

At any rate, when I tracked down the story in STORIES OF YOUR LIFE AND OTHERS, I read it and promptly had no idea how the movie “Arrival” could have come from “Story of Your Life”.

According to Wikipedia: “Heisserer [screenwriter] read the story and started work on a screen adaptation. Villeneuve I eventually discovered that “Cohen [producer] and Levine [journalist and filmmaker] and Levy [director, producer, actor (“Stranger Things”), however, introduced Villeneuve to the novella, which the director immediately took to, Heisserer completed a first draft, which Cohen, Levine, Levy, and Villeneuve and reworked into the final script. Villeneuve changed the title, as he felt the original sounded like a romantic comedy and that the script had become very different from the short story.”

Well…DUH! You got five people working off of a science fiction novella – what’d you expect but “a script…very different from the short story.”

That movie and story though, introduced me to the rest of Chiang’s work – which turned out to be almost entirely short stories. So, I though he might have something to say about writing!

I read the story “Hell Is the Absence of God”, when I read the collection. I was surprised now to find out how HONEST Chiang is: “To write this retelling of the Book of Job, in which one might predict an angel’s movements using a kind of meteorology, Chiang immersed himself in the literature of angels and the problem of innocent suffering; he read C. S. Lewis and the evangelical author Joni Eareckson Tada.” I’ve experienced authors who have dismissed my own beliefs without reading to find out WHAT I believe. They just know I’m a Christian. Chiang notes, “I’m curious about what you might call discredited world views. It can be tempting to dismiss people from the past—to say, ‘Weren’t they foolish for thinking things worked that way?’ But they weren’t dummies. They came up with theories as to how the universe worked based on the observations available to them at the time. They thought about the implications of things in the ways that we do now. Sometimes I think, What if further observation had confirmed their initial theories instead of disproving them? What if the universe had really worked that way?”

The more I read, the more I think Chiang might be one of the most honest SF writers I’ve ever read. But HOW does he write?

First of all, though others might consider him a “pro writer” (I’ve always given the definition of “pro writer” as someone who has been PAID for their writing. Chiang sees it differently: “…I started submitting stories for publication when I was about 15, [I started when I was 13!]) but it was many years before I sold anything…Writing for publication was always my goal…”

So, to do THAT, what did he do?

He wrote. When questioned about his “writing style”, he said, “In general, if there's an idea I'm interested in, I usually think about that for a long time and write down my speculations or just ideas about how it could become a story, but I don't actually start writing the story itself until I know how the story ends.

Me: I recently read this in an evaluation of what “form responses” mean for The Magazine of Fantasy & Science Fiction: “Template 2 is the ‘didn’t work for me’ template. It means something like, ‘Your story was good, I read it all the way through, but some big thing didn’t work for me, usually the ending. I know, endings are hard. But the emotional payoff, what you remember most about a story, is how it makes you feel at the end.’ You have to be an Olympic gymnast and nail that dismount.”

Chiang continues, “Once I have the destination in mind then I can build the rest of the story around that or build the rest of the story in such a way as to lead up to that.”

I do it the opposite – while I DO know where the story is going, I write the opening. Sometimes over, and over, and over again, until it sets the hook in a reader’s “mouth”, and they charge on into the story, flying to the end. However, I never considered the fact that instead of the BEGINNINGS, I remember how the story ENDED much more clearly. Once I reflected on it, I saw clearly what he was saying.

Ted Chiang doesn’t think of himself as an expert or a famous writer or even as particularly gifted. He just thinks about things, then does what every science fiction writer does: he asks the question, “What if?”

He’s very much a humble person: “…he has published fourteen short stories and a novella. 
He has won twenty-seven major sci-fi awards; he might have won a twenty-eighth if, a few years ago, he hadn’t declined a nomination because he felt that the nominated story…was unfinished...[Based on THIS], he has become one of the most influential science-fiction writers of his generation.”

When he wins awards: “His story…was included in last year’s edition of ‘The Best American Short Stories,’ and Junot Díaz, who edited that volume, has said that Chiang’s ‘Stories of Your Life and Others’ is ‘as perfect a collection of stories as I’ve ever read.’ Chiang himself seems to find this kind of praise bewildering.”

To summarize then: start with the ending; ask philosophical questions; consider your opinion one of many and not particularly noteworthy AND actively consider other points of view when crafting a story. Then write! Seems pretty straightforward to me.